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Three Words That Sell Nothing

三个卖不动货的词

营销管理深度阅读初级约 2 分钟场景 · vague marketing words# 邮件与写作# 演讲展示

官网上最常见也最没用的三个词:innovative、high-quality、user-friendly。读完你会知道该拿什么替掉它们,以及一个当场能用的检验:对手会说反话吗?

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Open ten company websites in a row. You will meet the same three words: innovative, high-quality, user-friendly. They sound safe. That is the problem. A word that no competitor would ever argue with does no work for you. It fills space and moves nobody.

连着打开十家公司的官网,你会撞见同样的三个词:innovative(创新的)、high-quality(高品质的)、user-friendly(好用的)。它们听上去很稳妥。问题恰恰在这儿。一个没有任何对手会反驳的词,替你干不了活。它只是占了地方,谁也打动不了。

Take innovative. No company calls itself old and slow. So the word tells the reader nothing new. Replace it with the thing you actually did. Our app opens in one second, not eight. That sentence cannot be copied by your competitor, because it is either true or false.

先说 innovative。没有哪家公司会自称『老旧又迟钝』,所以这个词没给读者带来任何新信息。把它换成你真正做过的那件事:我们的 App 一秒打开,不是八秒。这句话对手抄不走,因为它非真即假。

High-quality has the same problem. Every seller claims it. Quality is not a claim; it is a detail. The stitching is doubled at both handles. We test every unit for four hours before it ships. A reader can picture those two lines. Nobody can picture quality.

high-quality 是同一个毛病。每个卖家都这么说。品质不是一句主张,而是一个细节:两个提手处的走线是双针。每一台出厂前都要测四个小时。这两句话读者脑子里有画面。而『品质』这个词,谁也想不出画面。

User-friendly is the hardest one to give up, because it feels helpful. It is not. Show the reader the friendly part instead. Three taps from open to paid. No account needed for the first order. If you cannot name the step you removed, the word is hiding an empty promise.

user-friendly 是最难舍弃的一个,因为它看起来是在帮读者。它不是。你要做的是把『好用』本身摊开给他看:从打开到付款只要点三下;第一单不用注册账号。如果你说不出自己到底砍掉了哪一步,这个词底下藏着的就是一句空头承诺。

Here is a quick test for any line you write. Ask: would a competitor ever say the opposite? If nobody would ever say slow, low-quality or hard to use, then your word is not a claim at all. Cut it. Put a number, a step or a fact in its place.

给你一个随手可用的检验方法。写完一句话就问自己:会有对手说反话吗?如果没人会把自己说成『慢的、劣质的、难用的』,那你那个词根本算不上一句主张。删掉它,换上一个数字、一个步骤,或者一个事实。